Improvements

After putting all of the footage we had together we showed this first cut to Mr Ford and Mr Michie, here are the improvements they suggested:

• The titles needed to all last the same amount of time, we decided on 3 seconds.
• There needed to be some shot reverse shots showing the couple watching the piano.
• An establishing shot of the location.
• Our title sequence was too full, and we were trying to put too much in to two minutes, therefore we should delete the scenes between Jack and Simran handing over the money, and just meet Simran at the end of the sequence when Jack gets in the car with her.